poetomachia

4 December 2007 at 11:52 pm

tough

Don’t give an inch
Don’t crack a smile
Cause it is going to
Kill you after a while

by MattWriks  

4 Comments

  1. A cruel little ditty. Written with a bit of rage fuel.
    Ultimately the outcome is most painful to the source.

    Comment by MattWriks — 4 December 2007 @ 11:54 pm

  2. –a caution against venereal disease, perhaps?

    Comment by Sunsun — 5 December 2007 @ 10:42 pm

  3. or something equally virulent?

    Comment by Sunsun — 5 December 2007 @ 10:42 pm

  4. A goal here is to have the last line penetrate the listener
    until he catches the previous phrase. Cue audio track with
    crescendo chorus for last line, as the singer repeats in a
    chant, a misunderstood patient desire for the demise his
    source of agony.

    Comment by MattWriks — 11 December 2007 @ 5:20 pm

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