poetomachia

1 April 2009 at 1:24 am

frustrated

our massive struggle to understand
our endless wait to be understood
our tongue tied attempts to share
our hollow self-serving effort to be good

by MattWriks  

3 Comments

  1. probably part of a larger, as yet unwritten, piece

    Comment by MattWriks — 1 April 2009 @ 1:24 am

  2. Line 1: Not relevant for me right now!
    Line 2: Giving up on that, and ok about it
    Line 3: Been experiencing a lot of that lately
    Line 4: I GOTTA get rid of the vestiges

    This one gives me lots to reflect on. Even though I eschewed much of this, a year ago it would have hit me in the solar-plexus. You have a knack for doing that.

    Comment by Sunsun — 17 April 2009 @ 7:15 pm

  3. thank you. your compliments help me to stop worrying about the length.

    Comment by MattWriks — 18 April 2009 @ 2:27 pm

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