poetomachia

27 April 2008 at 7:09 pm

Redwood

I’m dodging your draft
I’m drafting your dodge
I will close my eyes
And everything will melt downhill
Leaving me standing
Like a redwood after a quake
Barely shaken, and grateful for the breeze

by Sunsun  

2 Comments

  1. An inspiring piece. I wonder if it belongs to the I.S. series.

    Comment by MattWriks — 29 April 2008 @ 7:36 pm

  2. I see that Mattwricks. It also connects on a superficial level to the Neil Diamond/Monkees hit “Stepping Stone,” and on a deeper level to the Buzzcocks’ “Autonomy”

    Comment by Sunsun — 29 April 2008 @ 10:01 pm

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